Visual verses rich with imagery

Advertisement

Advertise with us

Linda Besner’s Feel Happier in Nine Seconds (Coach House, 80 pages, $19) offers rich lines and a wry approach, loaded with fresh imagery: “On a good day my beard / is a flock of nihilists / who mock my desires.”

Read this article for free:


or

Already have an account? Log in here »

To continue reading, please subscribe:

Subscribe and receive a limited-edition Free Press branded hat or tote.

Digital Subscription

One year of digital access for only $205*

  • Enjoy unlimited reading on winnipegfreepress.com
  • Read the E-Edition, our digital replica newspaper
  • Access News Break, our award-winning app
  • Play interactive puzzles

*First annual payment billed as $205.00 + GST for one year. This annual subscription will automatically renew at $233.00 + GST every 52 weeks (10% off the regular annual price of $259.35). Offer available to new and qualified returning subscribers only. Cancel any time.

To continue reading, please subscribe:

Add Free Press access to your Brandon Sun subscription for only an additional

$1 for the first 4 weeks*

  • Enjoy unlimited reading on winnipegfreepress.com
  • Read the E-Edition, our digital replica newspaper
  • Access News Break, our award-winning app
  • Play interactive puzzles
Start now

*Your next Brandon Sun subscription payment will increase by $1.00 and you will be charged $17.95 plus GST for four weeks. After four weeks, your payment will increase to $24.95 plus GST every four weeks.

Hey there, time traveller!
This article was published 27/01/2018 (3168 days ago), so information in it may no longer be current.

Linda Besner’s Feel Happier in Nine Seconds (Coach House, 80 pages, $19) offers rich lines and a wry approach, loaded with fresh imagery: “On a good day my beard / is a flock of nihilists / who mock my desires.”

One poetic sequence uses a host of coloured letters (that can’t be reproduced here) and complex rules around word lengths (in the next passage, no word is less than three letters long) and what sorts of letters are repeating.

Besner’s so adept that everything seems breezy and conversational: “Listen, romance isn’t just finishing each others’ bacon cheeseburgers. It’s rosebuds, stardust, it’s boycotting stuff together.”

“I’m drinking for two,” Besner writes in another poem; dark but funny and complex but conversational, Feel Happier in Nine Seconds keeps its punchy promise.

● ● ●

Ashley-Elizabeth Best’s Slow States of Collapse (ECW, 104 pages, $19) stands as a stellar debut. “Daddy’s drinking is the glacier / that propels our life,” begins one poem, and the lines give a good sense of both Best’s facility with metaphor and her stark subject matter.

Another poem offers denser and more surreal imagery: “The descent begins, weather / the star-eaten sky. / I follow the trail of eyes, / those who’ve come before me.”

Best manages a raw emotionalism despite the dense lines, for a compelling tension.

“I’ve cluttered my life with people / who dislike me” — when Best breaks out of her twisting imagery and lays statements bare, devoid of imagistic dressing, it is nearly as startling as some of her bolder metaphors.

● ● ●

Christine McNair’s Charm (BookThug, 104 pages, $18) revolves around the work of conception, whether considering orchid pollination or renewing oneself in the wake of trauma.

“(S)tars predict blood / in every profession,” and McNair uses a fragmentary, fractured line and crashing repetitions to suggest conception as a craft is its own sort of traumatic work.

“Naked in the hot tub and the yawling gaping moon, monstrous silver disk. Stars. And more stars. The wind rushes through leaves. They bustle.” Images pile onto another like crinkled, dried leaves, crackling under the crush of one another.

● ● ●

Ted Landrum’s Midway Radicals & Archi-Poems (Signature, 106 pages, $18) explores where architecture and poetry might overlap, often drawing on source texts as quarries from which Landrum draws raw language that he restructures in columns and pillars.

“(P)erhaps poetry can poem in a poem,” reads one of the funnier moments — “poets paradigm the word world,” after all. Much of Landrum’s work has this sense of play, which elevates what could otherwise have been a dry conceptual approach.

In other moments, the lines hum more despairingly (“how the dark whispers a low song”); this local author has constructed the perfect companion to your Winnipeg winter.

Winnipeg English professor Jonathan Ball (@jonathanballcom) lives online at JonathanBall.com.

Report Error Submit a Tip

More Stories

Completely separating inmates unrealistic, inquest judge says in report on three Stony Mountain slayings

Erik Pindera 5 minute read Preview

Completely separating inmates unrealistic, inquest judge says in report on three Stony Mountain slayings

Erik Pindera 5 minute read 1:43 PM CDT

Nothing short of keeping inmates separated at all times could have prevented three unrelated prisoner-on-prisoner killings several years ago in Stony Mountain Institution’s maximum-security unit, an inquest judge has found.

Provincial court Judge Lindy Choy made the finding after overseeing an inquest earlier this year into the slayings of Adrian Fillion, 42, Michael Monney, 27, and Nolan Thomas, 26, all of which occurred at the hands of fellow maximum-security inmates in the federal prison just north of Winnipeg. The killings occurred when cells were unlocked, allowing inmates to briefly move around to other areas in the cell block.

“The overall impression I was left with from the (Stony Mountain Institution) witnesses was that management of inmates in a custodial facility is a very complex undertaking. There are clearly multiple levels of oversight involved in any decisions that are made and it is all done in a very structured manner,” Choy wrote in her report on the inquest, which was made public Tuesday.

“While maintaining complete physical distance between inmates at all times would have prevented the homicides from occurring, we know that from a social and psychological perspective, this is not generally realistic nor acceptable.”

Read
1:43 PM CDT

Canada resorting to its tried and true playbook

Niigaan Sinclair 5 minute read Preview

Canada resorting to its tried and true playbook

Niigaan Sinclair 5 minute read Yesterday at 6:00 AM CDT

In 1846, Britain faced an emergency influenced by the Irish famine, so leaders repealed the country’s “Corn Laws” and restrictions on imported food and grain, transitioning to a system of free trade.

This created a crisis in the then Province of Canada, which had relied on British “preferential” status to prop up its agricultural and resource industries.

As a result, Canada looked south for new markets and eventually negotiated a free trade agreement with the United States.

This required land to be acquired and converted for industrial use quickly, so Canada quickly dispatched Commissioner William Robinson to negotiate with Indigenous communities along Lake Huron and Lake Superior for land.

Read
Yesterday at 6:00 AM CDT

Province to acquire campground near former residential school

Morgan Modjeski 3 minute read Preview

Province to acquire campground near former residential school

Morgan Modjeski 3 minute read 6:00 AM CDT

A burial site for dozens of children who died while attending the Brandon Indian Residential School will be acquired by the province, the Free Press has learned.

Premier Wab Kinew will announce the province’s plan to protect Turtle Crossing Campground at a news conference in Brandon Wednesday to mark National Day for Truth and Reconciliation. The move is in partnership with the City of Brandon.

The graves of at least 56 children are located at the campground, the Sioux Valley Dakota Nation has said, pointing to a geophysical study conducted by an archaeology firm in 2018.

There have been longstanding concerns from Indigenous leaders and community members that people were camping on the resting place of children victimized by colonialism.

Read
6:00 AM CDT

Now-independent ex-Tory leader skips legislature’s first question period in four months

Chris Kitching 5 minute read Preview

Now-independent ex-Tory leader skips legislature’s first question period in four months

Chris Kitching 5 minute read 6:03 PM CDT

Crime rates, the cost of living and the state of health care were on the agenda Tuesday when the legislature’s fall sitting began a day after Obby Khan’s abrupt resignation from the Tory caucus.

Read
6:03 PM CDT

Accused grandparent scammer charged with sex crimes involving minor

Free Press staff 3 minute read 12:11 PM CDT

An Edmonton man accused of defrauding several Winnipeg seniors in so-called grandparent scams has also been charged for allegedly sexually assaulting a teenage girl in the city.

Winnipeg Police Service financial crime investigators were alerted after three city residents, all in their 80s, were defrauded of more than $37,000 in August after receiving calls from someone posing as a grandchild who claimed to need cash to pay for bail, police said Tuesday.

The first victim received several phone calls between Aug. 17 and 22 from a caller who claimed the victim’s grandson had been arrested and needed cash bail. The victim agreed to pay and handed over cash and gold and silver coins to a man who showed up at their door four separate times.

On Aug. 18, another adult received a call from someone claiming to be their grandson who needed cash for bail and the victim obliged, paying a man who went to their home to pick up money.

Bathhouse owner upset after judge grants bail to man accused in foiled bombing

Dean Pritchard and Morgan Modjeski 5 minute read Preview

Bathhouse owner upset after judge grants bail to man accused in foiled bombing

Dean Pritchard and Morgan Modjeski 5 minute read Updated: Yesterday at 5:00 PM CDT

The owner of a Notre Dame Avenue bathhouse is troubled after a man accused of planting a pipe bomb outside his club was granted bail.

Erik Lymen Olson, 59, was granted release following a contested bail hearing last Monday.

“I don’t think he should have got out with something like this — at all,” said Christopher Gregoire, owner of AQ Sauna.

Olson was arrested Sept. 12, one day after allegedly planting a pipe bomb outside the sex and lifestyle club.

Read
Updated: Yesterday at 5:00 PM CDT